Its pretty good.... the part 'to shield them from the icy air' is a good description. However the last too sentences are a bit too plain. To make them more interesting you could try and say something like "As we walked down the street it started to snow, the large snowflakes pounding against ......." and then continue it. Just try to vary your sentence beginnings and add a bit more description and length to some sentences. OVerall I'd say its a good start, only needs a couple changes :)
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